Behind four walls

Behind four walls

A Poem by Dream Weaver





Behind four walls I hide in plain sight, I could be transparent fading into twilight. It’s the silence pulsating some subliminal thought, a conflict of interest constitutes this onslaught


 What is sanity and who is to say, deficient guidelines that govern the way. Who is crazy and who is sane, behind four walls it’s solely eminent domain. Time is irrelevant inexplicably standing still, schizophrenic braying a Chinese fire drill.


 Invisible boundaries manifest this disease, yes behind these four walls there's no board of trustees. Just you and I and all of our friends, and the little voice paying all dividends.


© 2016 Dream Weaver


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Damn that last line was excellent. A Really punctual end to a well punctuated poem. Mad props!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

7 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Aaron, it truly is a mental world we live in.
Whoa, menacing and to the point, like a bullet to the head! Woke me right out of my stupor this morning, better than coffee, and that's saying a freaking lot!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

Why thank U...it snaps me out of my stupor everyday.. :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

The pleasure was mine. ;-)
What lies beneath.. the facade and behind close doors or after knowing someone for a time . somethings come to light you rather not know . People and issues scary , you depicted this perfectly. Your mental history chart great line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

Thank you Moon, how true how true!
Wow an intense look inside the mind of someone with insanity issues. I love the idea of hiding in plan sight, something many do with at least parts of themselves. Awesome poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

...and yet I still have hope, the fool that I am.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Hope is what keeps us alive, that's the one thing we can never afford to lose.
Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

Agreed! When all else fails there's always hope.
Wow, a creppy picture but beautiful strong words. Well done.
~Tasha

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Tasha, yes a creepy picture indeed!
 Tasha

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
WOW freaky picture you got there but very strong and very good!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

my pleasure sir
Dream Weaver

11 Years Ago

:)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on January 15, 2013
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Dream Weaver
Dream Weaver

Paradise, FL



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