Medieval Love

Re-vamped :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Beyond the realms of reality there lies  
certain tranquility free from critique
and alibis. Together as one we strive
for perfection, above the clouds we
avoid detection.

Our eyes truly mirror the depth of our
souls and release us from all our earthly
woes. This knight whose armor tis
steely and true, fights for your honor, his

devotion for you.

 

Everlastingly, my life’s blood flowing within

your dreams, every pulse of your heart it

sparkles and gleams. No truer love has ever
existed no passion could ever compare, this
ravenous magnificent love that only we two
 would share.

 

I’m coming to your rescue, my white

horse so gallantly swift, nothing shall ever

defeat me, not lore, nor legend nor myth.

 

 

Reviews

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I love this piece. I'm very fond of the chivalry of the Renaissance," French for "rebirth, an age of artistic, social nuances.
"Beyond the realms of reality there lies a certain tranquility"
Very elegantly stated
This poem is a refreshing view of "The way it was"

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

lovely perfection~ poetic valiant~

[Celestial Being]

the ending is as beautiful as the beginning .. very romantic ..well done! :)

[Angel's Lady]

awwwwwwww, I love this! So romantic and oh so gallant! Great job!

[Amy Bumpas]

Where is my Knight-n-Shining Armour LOL! This is so
romantic...great write!

[Brianna Brie]

No truer love existed no passion could
dare compare, this ravenous magnificent
love that only we two would share. I’m
coming to your rescue, my white horse
gallantly swift, nothing shall defeat me,no
lore or legend nor
myth.

Ah, a different kind of knight. One who rescues you from a life of indifferent, non-existent feelings. I love that last verse. Great ending line!

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ah, my kind of poem. magical words beautifully pieced together, I want that love :)

[54321]

unattainable love... perfection. Perhaps this is possible in heaven. Reads like a beautiful dream.

[Cassiopia Summers]

This reminds me of a wedding, and wedding vows. It paints a wonderful picture of a simple traditional white and black wedding. (:

[PadfootBlack]

This is very nice, great job!