Drawn to you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I’m drawn to you, I so justly exclaim
two dysfunctional organism’s that

are one in the same.

 

Like two stray dog’s set free to
roam, probing desperately for a
compassionate home.

A pessimistic pair so misconstrued,
mangled and tangled lasciviously

lewd.  

 

Misguided fools well who’s to say,

life isn’t always a cabaret.

 

You my armor and I your shield, to

never submit to never yield.

 

All who think it a travesty could

never fathom the gravity.

 

Drawn to you it's hard to explain, 

I really don't want to keep it contained!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Dana Kathryn]

This is very good! Two tethered souls attract,They both Love the other,Two flawed souls find semblance together,Pessimistic,misconstrued.Mangled and tangled lasciviously lewd,WOW I Love it.. Awesome write!

[Cherrie Palmer]

...You my armor and I your shield, never submit never yield... great line and poem

[Gypsy Dreamer]

A piece of art. Perfect

[Amy Bumpas]

Line to line we are drawn like a dog to a bone...I love the different
metaphors you used for different words. Good or bad, no matter
whom one is drawn to...it just happens..

[Starbound25]

the wording is magnificent love it

[Broken Girl]

I like it! Very nice! I also think it's really cool how you put pictures into your writings. How exactly do you do that?

[Brianna Brie]

A pessimistic pair so misconstrued,
mangled and tangled lasciviously
lewd.

Excellent write! One of the things I like about the man I love is that he is just as crazy as me. You put it all in words. Thanks. The last stanza may have been missed. It would look better in the same font/color.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a delightful entwining~ everyone has a pair~ =)~ lascivious or pure~ there's a matching set of each ~
love the word choices throughout~

[Rosalind Dee]

nailed it yet again joe :D what can i say.... A pessimistic pair so misconstrued,
mangled and tangled lasciviously
lewd. .. so deliciously well written..