I hate her

I hate her.

She doesn't deserve you.

I do.

Her smile is evil.

It's full of hate.

You think shes an angel.

But shes just here to hurt you.

I would never hurt you like her.

But you don't know that.

So all I can do is cry.

Author's Note

Soo my first piece. Ever. Wrote in a million years ago. I wanna make it better. Ideas needed

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a nice write. I liked it. I love the story within it. I can relate to this as well. I think the shortness was to the point. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

[*~* ReAdInG Mu5iC *~*]

I really like this! I can kind of relate to this but honestly, I think it's good just like this, short. :) Keep it up!

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i liked it...the only thing you can to do is find your passion and emotion for it and then it will be good no matter what because it will mean something to you...

[Rovy1]

You need to to expand a little the question is who You pinpointed the emotion but expand the writing your definitley heading in the right direction keep up the good
work

[coma black☯]

This was really good. I could relate a lot :) keep writing.