You

You

A Poem by LiveLaughLove

Love who you are,

And love who you'll be,

'Cause I need to see,

If I'll love you to.

For I want to.

With your green eyes,

That are so intense.

With your sculpted muscles,

That are so strong,

But yet so gentle.

With your black hair,

That's as soft as silk.

And with your perfect features,

That make you an angel.

I need to know,

If you'll be my angel.

Or if you'll be,

The jerk that they'll make you be,

Cause if your with them,

It'll go to your head,

And soon you'll no longer be.

You'll become one,

With the pods they call "people"

© 2014 LiveLaughLove


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LiveLaughLove
Tell me what you think. I accept both critisism and comments. :)

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This was interesting.
Descriptive and nice imagery, but mostly interesting.
Overall, a nice read.
My favorite line;
"Love who you are,
And love who you'll be."
It was all beautiful, though, so don't get me wrong. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2010
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LiveLaughLove
LiveLaughLove

L.A., CA



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Me? I'm just a girl from sunny L.A. who likes to do fun stuff, stupid stuff, and be weird! I love being mysterious, creative, writing, reading and keep you guessing for more!!!! And I love exclamati.. more..

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