The day it forever rained

Bringing tears from autumn skies. The Earth tries to wash her blinding eyes.

Upon leavin the womb we are only taking steps closer to an inevitable tomb 

So between life and death we are here together. Why do we fight, are'nt we all tethered

by strings of fate. But no we hate because of faith or creed, smite and greed. So now the Earth  cries and will never dry.

Reviews

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

I would say that it is really good. I like the sentence " The Earth tries to wash her blinding eyes."...