Let them be!

Let them be!

A Poem by OR
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Just another scream to humanity...

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Hey can you hear this pray

All around the world

I’ll just run and say

All around the world

I’ll stand up and say

 

God, I know it’s a long way

But I’m going to start the first step today

 

We’re brothers can’t you see?

We all got a piece of humanity

We’re brothers can’t you see?

So why you’re stepping over my dignity

 

We’re brothers can’t you feel?

So why all you’re giving me is fear

We’re brothers can’t you stop?

Of bringing me down even when you’re on the top

We’re brothers can’t you chill?

And quit the army and the kill

We’re brothers can’t you pray?

So we all live in peace one day

 

Make your step today

Stop ignoring and say

 

We’re all brothers can’t you light?

Your spirit and stop the fight

 

You’re a human I can see

So stop the fights and let them be

You’re human can’t you find?

Another side of you of joy and pride

 

In the end can’t you see?

This act of yours is only bringing misery

So please give yourself and the world a bit of mercy

Let yourself be!

Let them be!

© 2010 OR


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Nice write. A scream indeed, for such an insanity that this become the only way we can express the intensity of such an aberration as hate and war.
My favorites lines :
"We’re brothers can’t you pray?
So we all live in peace one day"
This world does lack peace, and it is only when powerful men of this universe find it within themselves that it will be able to flow millions of others. Meanwhile, we are left to try and find it ourselves.

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much appreciation of the message of your poetry , this one stands out . peace

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Do like the grander flavor of this treat. We're together here bro. You have got great soul, no doubt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very profound, very John Lennon esque. ^_^

"We’re brothers can’t you see?

We all got a piece of humanity

We’re brothers can’t you see?

So why you’re stepping over my dignity"

This is such a powerful statement. It does certainly beg the question to the masses. Very Powerful.

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A poignant plea.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write. A scream indeed, for such an insanity that this become the only way we can express the intensity of such an aberration as hate and war.
My favorites lines :
"We’re brothers can’t you pray?
So we all live in peace one day"
This world does lack peace, and it is only when powerful men of this universe find it within themselves that it will be able to flow millions of others. Meanwhile, we are left to try and find it ourselves.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

words of wisdom, let it be.

I enjoyed reading this quite a bit; it's so true, we all need to sit back and relax for once :P Thanks for sharing this.

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