Love is what I do!

Love is what I do!

A Poem by OR

Love is the only thing I can do
Love is the only thing I can give to you

I can't give you
The fancy walks
I can't give you
The hot talks

I can't give you
No flirting no sarks
I can't give you
No tigers no sharks

I can't give you
The spicy kisses
I can't cheat on you
With other chicks

I can't offer you
No money no gifts
I can't offer you
No jokes no s***s

I can offer you
The man you see
And the beats of this heart
Inside of me

Because
Love is the only thing I can do
Love is the only thing I can give to you

Love, baby is what I do!

© 2010 OR


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Very profound in it's simplicity. I like that. Not too complicated, yet deep. For who could ever want anything less or more than a man truthful and full of heart. You truly fulfil the exact of what love should be. Only you and they, for you and they, as you and they. Wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Good and simple. I thought that the passages are very true to what men should be to women. We should be just that, there to love them and care for our women to take care of them in any way.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. A honest heart is worst a million dollars. In a relationship must hold hands and talk to each other. Laughter keep the heart and mind content. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Epic..........!
U R GENIUS!

I LOVE THIS!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't have a clue as to what a sark is....but it's easy to get the meaning ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple but says so much - the power of love...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real love is the finest gift in all the world, and the rarest.
On the poetic side, don't strive so hard for the rhyme, you have an innate sense of flow. Try writing free verse, unconcerned with rhyming.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very profound in it's simplicity. I like that. Not too complicated, yet deep. For who could ever want anything less or more than a man truthful and full of heart. You truly fulfil the exact of what love should be. Only you and they, for you and they, as you and they. Wonderful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow sums up love very nicley. really loved this :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple and lucid to say the least, you can feel a refreshing essence of love. good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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