CAN YOU HEAR ME?

CAN YOU HEAR ME?

A Poem by purpleeye
"

about pain

"

GIVE MORE LOVE.....TO SOME ONE THAT CALLS...

OH... YOU CAN HEAR IT IF YOU LISTEN...

LET THE MUSIC TAKE YOUR SOUL TO HIGHTS BEYOUND THE

ROCKS!!!!

I AM TIERD FORM ALL THE PAIN....THE PUPLE TEARS KEEP

FALLING...

WHEN I LOOK INTO YOURS EYES... I SEE YESTERDAY STARING

RIGHT BACK AT ME...

RUN  AWAY... FIND THAT PLACE....LOOK INTO THE MIRROR

IT WILL TAKE YOU...IF YOU CALL

PEOPLE COME AND GO....THOUGHTS ARE THERE FOREVER

MEMORIES NEVER FADE!!!

WISH UPON THAT STAR FOLLOW WHERE IT GOES...

LET THE COTTON WOOL GO.... WALK IN THE SUNLIGHT!

WALK IN THE SKY LIGHT!...ALL MY CRYING....TAKE’S TIME!

 CRAZY, MADNESS, INSANITY, FOOLISH,  ARE BUT WORDS!

BUT YET THE MIRROR STILL CALLS... STEP  INSIDE!

© 2008 purpleeye


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A well written piece. Very deep and thought provoking.

Posted 16 Years Ago


it is awesome!

it goes inside.. deep with every word......shrill............
YOU CAN HEAR IT IF YOU LISTEN...

THE PURPLE (it is purple..isn't is) TEARS

WHEN I LOOK INTO YOURS EYES... I SEE YESTERDAY STARING RIGHT BACK AT ME...

CRAZY, MADNESS, INSANITY, FOOLISH, ARE BUT WORDS!

Hail!
BEAUTIFUL!!!
Brilliant!
A wonderful write.

I love it...damn..love it!!!

LET THE COTTON WOOL GO...........awesome!!!

MEMORIES NEVER FADE!!!

Marvelous....

Thanks for sharing.

regards
rupam

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the way this one is written, it is a very interesting piece of art that makes me see wonderful visuals of the story you are painting for all to see. Good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2008

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purpleeye
purpleeye

United Kingdom



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