Standing Tall

Spoken-word slam poetry. Rap it! :)

You don't understand

that I have no choice

Gotta expand

Be grand

On my own two feet stand

My future's all planned

Though some will resist

me, I shall persist, see?

Don't care of you disagree

I'm being me

I'm not this way

accidentally

Please help me!

I'm having trouble remembering

Why it was so urgent we were

dismembering

the nobody

 

 

Oh yeah! It's cause she

had the nerve

to spit the words

that everybody's been thinking

And now their cheeks are pinking

Cause they know my rhymes are true

As real as me or you

 

 

She stood up and stopped that

train from comin down the track

Smacked the m**********r cross the face and back

And now she stands tall

Wind blowing in her face

But she don’t fall

Those who doubted crawl

Away, slinkin’ back

All ashamed

that they didn’t believe

The impossible can be seen

And done

They made fun

But now…

 

 …they’re outdone.

 

Author's Note

Comments? Reviews? Questions? Fire away. (PLEASE :})

Reviews

[TAO]

Ah...tribute to the 'haters', I see. Inspiring Work, PadfootBlack. I think you very well may have done a number with this one.

[My Fair Lady]

Thank you for the note to "rap" this piece. It worked and not only that it was good. I too wanna smack somebody. :) Enjoyed.

[Dream Weaver]

Loved it, my favorite lines were;

"She stood up and stopped that
choo-choo train from comin down the track
Smacked the m**********r cross the face and back".

Great job...

[Bubo]

Great lyrical rap!!And loved the content....and isn't it good to see nasty people being outdone..........positive and gritty!

Oh yeah! It's cause she
had the nerve
to spit the words
that everyone's been thinking
And their cheeks are pinking
Cause they know my rhymes are true
As real as me and you

[Matthew Kult]

I didn't know you rapped. LOL.

Good write. Great read. I liked smacking the m**********r in the face and back. I know a lot of m***********s I would like to smack.

With Love,

Jaidyn