intention

it's a little weird and one of my most personal poems, you guys are the first to read this on... so enjoy.

 

How far?

I’m riding on my last intention.

My last breathe, my last thought, I’m loosing my last nerve, I wish I could loose all my last feelings, I want to feel numbness to take away my pain. I want my last feeling to feel the pain, I want to live and yet I want to die, keep striving and stop feeling.

 

Reviews

[*~Kristy~*]

I really liked this one... I could tell that it was very personal and came straight from the heart... Very good job :) Keep writing from the heart, if you get inspiration, go with it :)