Stop.Stop.Stop

Every minute a person is born
Every minute a person died
Everybody first wish had always been
Wishing death comes upon someone else but you
What if that wish comes true but false
What if it comes upon the loved ones of yours
Think about it-Death struck
But it was..your mom who got hit
The one who carried you for 9 months
The one who labored you
The one who gives you food
The one who been there for you-your whole life
You and your siblings just standing there
Watching as your mother says her last word
Closes her eyes for the last time
And...past away

Author's Note

This was a very powerful subject to me

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

Oh! what a heart felt story. Consoling or typing fancy words doesn't put out anybody of their misery. The loss they had cannot be fulfilled by just mere words.
But still a kind gentle and gentle approach of words can even cut through the solid ice and melt it to tears, which is the best way to outcome the sorrows.

[SkyVy]

I'm glad you understand it!

[Manasa.L]

Yes a heartfelt poem it is