Hall Ticket

Necessarily in need of somebody to talk

Sometimes I feel

like a hall ticket

Crumpled and thrown out

after the exam......

Reviews

[tanmay7551]

Powerful words! True, to many this might be of relevance as they may feel being used and then thrown out when not important.

[Parvathy Nandan]

Thank you..yes it takes strong willpower to be not used

[siddhi]

simple sophiticated beatiful


from siddhi

[Parvathy Nandan]

thankyou sweet :)

[M P Ramesh]

Parvathy,
Until the results are out you are so precious
Even after result , the number you carry on yours defines the future
the scent of you will make anyone enable time-travel
what else so needed?


Carry on...


M P Ramesh

[Chirag Kumar]

Anger expressed in simple words. Well done!

[Parvathy Nandan]

thank you :)

[Solar]

So much packed into that short piece - a ticket to a whole hidden story left to the reader's mind!

This writing passes with flying colours!

[Parvathy Nandan]

thank you so much for your review.cheers :)

[Solar]

You're welcome - please feel free to give feedback on some of my writings. Thanks.