Loveless Lullaby

to the tempo of "Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the lord my soul to keep" etc....

Now I lay myself to bed
Life is life and all I dread

Venom courses through my veins

Hate pours down like freezing rain

I am damned by impure thoughts
My soul lost with my black heart

If I choke and die tonight
I will haunt you through the night

I loved you more than you can know
Forgive me for letting you go

Author's Note

just came.. quick write.. having problems with my muse

Reviews

[PasDeChat]

added one word... final 2 lines..

[Valentine]

Muse is fine, last line could have had a different meaning..lol and God bless,,Kathie

[Jeff Bresee]

Reword it a bit for better flow and it will be perfect. I really like the it.