No Control

No Control

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen

No Control

And I would have you moulded in innocence,

wax dripping on your skin,
warm on your n*****s
as destiny plays her harp
and you feel secure
in your rapture.

Free to consider
the meaning of life
you open yourself to all possibilities,

and in that freedom
you discover meaning,
you discover hope.

Hope for a future full of promise,

full of love

and deep carnal desire;

yet you have no control.

 

10/08/12

© 2012 John Alexander McFadyen


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I suppose..in a relationship built on trust and lust...one would be obligated to give up all sense of control. A beautiful concept..but one I can't yet identify with.

Muse

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

No; as long as its mutual it has ballance!

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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