Soothing Rage

Soothing Rage

Let not your sparkle

turn to rage

over the merest slight,

but embrace it

to your breast

and hold it

precious tight.

I hear you scream

and if I could choose,

would soothe

the passage of torment

that seeks your tears,

and stroke away the hurt

with warm and smooth caress

and deep and endless kisses.

 

13/09/12

Reviews

[KarinaT]

Kindness in the face of hurt rage is a much underrated quality. You have captured the scene perfectly

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Why thank you kind lady!

[lee von cleef]

The invoker often am I .I should memorize this poem to save my bacon.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If you think I'm kissing you fella....................

[lee von cleef]

Any love is good love, 'Boy George"

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Totally romantic and gentle.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

:)

[Mia]

"that seeks your tears,
and stoke away the hurt
with warm and smooth caress
and deep and endless kisses."
AH...I just died a little bit inside! So soft and tender. It’s beautiful in a way that takes my breath away.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you as always Mia and I just spotted the typo!!! Stroke not stoke! So I have changed it.

[Mia]

I didn't even notice that...I read stroke to begin with...haha

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

This is erotica done with a soft kindness. Sweet.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Someone who was feeling hurt and angry. Thanks Shelley

[Southern Cross]

Sounds like the voice of my Knight in Shining Armor...If only I could find him in these heavy woods.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And I thought Southern Cross a Guy!

[Southern Cross]

LOL way too funny maybe I should put my pic up instead of the ship.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes it is way too masculine!

[Mia]

I laughed soooooo hard when I read this :) I also thought you were a guy…whoopsie daisy!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad it's not just me with gender dysphoria lol! Go for the picture!

[Southern Cross]

Now here's a pic to "Sooth My Rage" over my gender LOL ..I only keep my pics in my profile to be taken seriously as a writer