Hippocratic Oath (Hypocritical Oaf)

Hippocratic Oath (Hypocritical Oaf)

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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My mother was killed by a surgeon!

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Hippocratic Oath (Hypocritical Oaf)

He butchered you!

yet he was spared

the mass grave

of delinquent doctors

as white coated ghosts

hid his piteous hide

in a shroud of black deceit.

Inky words upon poisoned parchment,

an excuse for a trial

that never happened;

justice denied.

A peer review

that screamed

“There but for the grace of God!”

And in that grace you now lie

mother,

another collateral damaged corpse

buried by his dark incompetence.

 

06/05/13

© 2013 John Alexander McFadyen


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The incompetence of certain doctors, it's such a sad thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Certainly is Junert. We put our lives and the lives of loved ones in their hands.
Junert

11 Years Ago

Yes and many die as a result.
Wow John, sorry....amazingly potent read here. I have my own story, I feel this one in my bones. This one punches you upside the head.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Given I fought for at least a credible inquiry for eighteen months and failed I feel this even a dec.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

A privileged lot who hide behind the code of white and don't have to own up to their mistakes.
Great write with dark tone, though honestly :) I have difficulty decoding the story. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Oh sorry Mr. John, condolence to your Family.
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

Thanks Marc. It was years ago but it still feels sad that a doctor can do what he wishes and his col.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Yeah it is sad Mr. John it also happened in my nephew he was disabled because of medical malpractice.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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