May I have The Pleasure?

May I have The Pleasure?

Your reticence

is driving a wedge between us.

We have bowed and curtsied

for far too long

and now it is time

to begin the dance,

to take to the floor,

face to face,

toe to toe,

eye to eye.

A most romantic encounter

as we partner

in an airy and elegant waltz,

our bodies gliding as one

as we float lightly

in happy, warm, milky

satisfaction.

 

02/08/14

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, sometimes the little dance we do can get frustrating. Get on with it already! Stomp feet! Some people are slower than others to pick up the pace.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

And in this case she will never commit! Thank you 'M'

[AprilRN1210]

well, isn't this one a tease.... Not really nice of you to tease a lady now... just saying... beautifully written with charm and finesse, it seduces the reader to the dance floor promising satisfaction and magic... and you left me there... alluring me with elegant flow of words, delicious imagery, and heart fluttering sentiment, then... right as my heart is speeding up, ready for the action... the end... oh my goodness.... shame on you... alas, I shall recover, but am going to pout anyways.. captivating, sensual, and romantic.. I really did enjoy.. I love the way you write...

[John Alexander McFadyen]

April you are so very kind. This is a lovely thoughtful review; overly generous but I am flattered. Many thank yous. To know someone enjoys your scribbles is the 'raison d'etre' of us writers.

[AprilRN1210]

don't do "overly generous" or flattery sir.. nope.. not me... I state what I see, and how something makes me feel, and how much I enjoyed it or didn't... Sometimes I am too honest, gets me in trouble.. but if I leave a "glowing" review, it is because something earned it.. it touched me.. it spoke to me... it made me think... it made me feel.. I dunno what that "fancy" word you used, but think I get the gist of it.. ((hugs)) to you..

[Frieda P]

You just don't quit do you John? That's what I love most about you hon, your tenacity, oh....and your poetry!! ;) May I lead?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I would expect no less from you my Lady and would concede with valour.

[Frieda P]

Your milky satisfaction gig might be up if someone else reads this....just saying. ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It is up anyway my Lady. I have a date tomorrow night.

[Frieda P]

With the milky wonder? ;)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No my Lady; if only

[Frieda P]

Home so soon, I guess you didn't get lucky eh?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nah my date is tonight my Lady 20:00.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh NICE!!
"A most romantic encounter

as we partner

in an airy and elegant waltz,

our bodies gliding as one

as we float lightly

in happy, warm, milky

satisfaction."


Such silky words, John... I love this part~ "happy, warm, milky satisfaction"..

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Robbie (twice lol!)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You're welcome... (twice) (hehehehe)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh NICE!!
"A most romantic encounter

as we partner

in an airy and elegant waltz,

our bodies gliding as one

as we float lightly

in happy, warm, milky

satisfaction."


Such silky words, John... I love this part~ "happy, warm, milky satisfaction"..

Lovely write!~xoxo~:)