Sad Troll

Sad Troll

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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It is time this site acted on this constant abuse!

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Sad Troll

You are pathetic.

Simply sad.

You have no life unless you

have someone to abuse.

All of your caustic froth,

spilling in septic spittle

from dry cracked insane lips,

has little effect

as it is easily wiped away

as your attendants

drag you, sedated,

back to your padded cell.

 

08/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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John Alexander McFadyen

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You write very well. I wouldn`t worry too much about this person, just carry on doing your excellent poetry !

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I hope I have captured in this vitriolic piece the fact that he does not get to me, although I think.. read more
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Ya, just block him. Writing all this stuff gives him the attention he seeks. Why would he stop now?

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

If only it was so easy Lynn. I have blocked about thirty of his identities. He also contacts me thro.. read more
I like the use of padded cell haha creative write my friend :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Glad you liked it Aaron, many thanks.
i went over to d u poetry looking for my good friend
sammy said they wouldn`t let his a*s in
i started to shout when i learned they kicked his a*s out

he is jealous of you john

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I have no idea why after two weeks he started attacking again, unless he was away on vacation or som.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

he has many personalities john
As the snake strikes you better be the mongoose. The mongoose wins each time

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Good advice my friend, many thanks.
I have no idea what everyone is talking about but I am glad I haven't experienced it. So far everyone has been very encouraging and give suggestive reviews. No most are good and some are bad but I think that's good in a way, that makes you grow. I hope whatever you are talking about stops though, it shouldn't be here with like artists. With that said John, I did like the poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Robert and I hope you don't get attacked by the manipulators and trolls too.
He has antagonized and spewed venom in such a hostile way for so long. I don't think he will ever stop. Each time he recreates himself, I block him. He is a bitter man to be pitied. Your words are well written. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi.
I do not know who this poem is directed towards but, it is surely written with venom. It is direct, to the point and I would imagine due to its shortness of length, spot on!
This sound track grows on you, especially when you know the song.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you and many do know who it is aimed at as he/she has harassed many writers on the site.
Well said John, the title got me straight away, i've heard so much about this but had no experience, I have lost two excellent poets from my friends due to this (Frieda and Will) and have been blocked by someone i took to be a friend because he said i was a fool for sympathizing with a bad guy when i did'ent realize he was bad and then when my ex friend pointed this out, i later went on to write 'Hidden faces' which was a general swipe at those who hide behind different IDs but somehow my ex friend decided that i sympathized and wrote the poem at the same time, therefore making me a fool, i'm afraid its my problem to not be able to see anything but the good in people until they hurt me, that's why i'm Asperger's man, we don't know the bad until it hits us, you know for someone with no experience of this poems title i sure seem to have a lot to say on it lol, excellent poem John, do ignore my rant please :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I have ignored him for weeks and yesterday it all started again with a mass attack on my pages from .. read more
R Smith

8 Years Ago

This is a terrible thing to hear, there should be safeguards against abuse here but i have to admit .. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Richard. I am stronger than this. I see it as a challenge, as sport. He/she is simply nast.. read more

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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