Smitten

Smitten

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

When you simply fall......

"

Smitten

Take my breath away

with your scintillating smile

for I am fallen.

 

14/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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John Alexander McFadyen

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Wow such amazing words for a simple fall?;D
Just kidding,All our feelings are far from being simple and especially,love
I loved "scintillating smile".Gives me a picture of what the beloved would look like.And smiles are scintillating ,no matter who makes use of them.It's this amazing thing in the world after all, with some inexplicable magic in it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I agree. Love is simple but complex. Many thanks FCB.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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