The Moon and I

The Moon and I

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Love beneath the lies of life.

"

The Moon and I

You bowled me over

with the nature

of your absolute beauty.

I gasped on seeing you for real.

I knew that I had fallen hard

upon these stones,

and would drown

in your eyes

and the comfort

of your sweet

and tender breasts.

I am but a simple man

but I would give you

the earth.

 

01/07/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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the moon and the stars john,lovely write

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you WM
 wordman

8 Years Ago

you`re welcome john
Ok, if you insist, I'll accept this as an early birthday gift! ; ) But let me say this - you are far from being a simple man!

Kelly
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Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Fruit cake?
Kelly Scheppers

8 Years Ago

...a strawberry shortcake. Should I send you a virtual slice?
John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Now that sounds delightful!
love should be simple but we tend to complicate it... this is such a passionate piece, John... i've fallen like this... i love the way you execute a piece...great song too!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much FT
There is nothing "simple" about
Love and Adoration...


Lovely..............Jazz

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

But Jazz it is far from complicated. Thank you so much
J. J.  Nightingale

8 Years Ago

I think you are right............. You are welcome... :)

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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