Berkeley Square

Berkeley Square

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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A moment in time.

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Berkeley Square

A Nightingale sang

and I fell to the hypnotic

sweetness of her tones.

I looked upon her dark

and tantalisingly breathless beauty

and wished it were true.

I longed for that moment

to be real.

I hoped that life could be

the fairytale I had been promised.

So many times promised

only to be denied.

 

01/07/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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...when you write like this, no one can touch you! Wow! ...and Harry Connick Jr., too!

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

You are so very kind Kelly. Many thank yous!
reminds me of the Beats---and those days of longing for the surreal to become the real...

intensity in the lines...i remember these moments, and wish them back...wondering if i would take more advantage of them than i did.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob
oh, how often are we set-up by the promise of those tales, only to be denied? Too many, I am afraid. Yet, we continue to fall for the pretty voice. This is a moment captured perfectly and succinctly in freat form, John.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you kindly FT.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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