A Woman's Touch

Mesmerising.......

A Woman's Touch

Infinite beauty

knows no bounds.

There are no restraints,

no rough edges,

upon which to gouge

delicate hands.

You exude warm

honey glaze

from every pore

as I gaze

upon you

all the more.

And I die

in a freeze of desire

as I breathe in

the essence of you,

lighting every burning

fire

that can be lit

in this

mortal sphere,

where men reside.

 

08/02/17

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Wow wow wow! I think this poem is
mindblowing. John you are my inspiration always.

Happy Valentines Day!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you sweet Divya. Your friendship and writing have given comfort and inspiration to me often.

[DIVYA]

You are always welcome John :)

[wordman]

a woman's touch,nothing else will ever do !

[John Alexander McFadyen]

True Ron, So true. Many thanks.

[Lydia Shutter]

Fanning myself....so seductive, sensual, romantic! "And I die in a freeze of desire." Super line! Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Wow! Thank you for such a lovely response Lydi!

[Einstein Noodle]

sublime ...like breathing in her exhaled breath ..that close ..love it! i especially appreciate your closing line "where men reside" ... i think we get kicked around a lot ..so hears lifting a glass to manhood! ;)
E.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Einstein; indeed we do get 'kicked about' so cheers!

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the last three lines..and i like how you kept the rhyme subtle with your perfect scheme...

i feel the essence here.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Jacob; inspired by a muse.