Secrets

Secrets

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

Sometimes we meet people who affect us fundamentally but whom we cannot have.

"

Secrets

You lay breathless still

in the shadow of shadows

dripping with desire.

 

25/08/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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Wonderful use of words. You made the reader believe every word. Thank you John for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


a perfect haiku john,wonderful job

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Thank you Ron, glad you enjoyed it.
Timing John - was the arrow that killed this particular C**k Robin and that's a hard thing to have to admit.
I truly relate to this as 'that which we only really know when we experience it.'

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeedio Tony, you hit the victim on the head. Thanks old buddy lol!
Such a beautiful thought John. A matter of perspective.

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Indeed sweet poetess. Many thank yous.
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

You are welcome

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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