This Seduction

This Seduction

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

When desire is mutual but forbidden.

"

Hot wax

melts and slowly

drips in single-track

trickles,

and flows over

yesterday's  trail

to build character

and form.

 

The aroma of

lavender candles,

of perfume

and pheromones,

permeates

the dusk.

 

Sweet musk

and cherry lips

meld desire

as the darkness

begins to close in

and shadows

soften into

balmy abandon.

 

Affectionate skin surrenders

and brushes

receptive, hypersensitive skin.

 

A murmuration

of yearnings

flocks like starlings

in the half light

as fingers touch

and hands discover

hidden treasures.

 

A breath, a sigh,

a fluttering

of longing

alights upon

a willing stage

as stars collide

in a hungry frenzy,

 

to feed upon

mouth

to mouth

to mouth

passion,

 

then fall away

into the soft

willingness

of mutual lust

 

as the ache

eases

and sleep

slips softly

over us like

a warm, inviting

duvet.

 

08/10/20

© 2020 John Alexander McFadyen


Author's Note

John Alexander McFadyen

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Wow!! The likening of sensual touch to a flock of birs flying, the best one for me. I have always wanted to write something erotic poetically, but it just remained a thought. Thank you for inspiring me!

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Hello Markus! Hope you are well and still saving lives. Look forward to reading an erotic write from.. read more
It is reassuring to know that good erotica can be written without vulgarity. Very, very sensuous imagery in this one. Like the way it builds up, reaches a peak, then slowly ebbs away. Like the act itself.

Posted 4 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

4 Years Ago

Thank you JTB. I guess I dislike the vulgarity because it demeans a natural and precious encounter b.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

64 Views
3 Reviews
Added on October 8, 2020
Last Updated on October 9, 2020

Author

John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



About
Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

Writing