The Shrew and The Walrus

The Shrew and The Walrus

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

OK silly period ends; I'm shrew with it!

"

A shrew and a walrus took a trip to the coast

for that wily mammal knew she loved it the most,

to stand on the sand, fresh salty breeze on her snout

the warmth of the sun, to the sea looking out.

 

So they took a romantic stroll on the dunes

while he sang her all his known love tunes.

The sun started setting, the moon on the rise

as sparkling stars filled those heavenly skies.

 

He bent on one flipper and took out a ring

and offered to her life devotion to bring.

She looked up at his smile, his whiskers so prim

and told him she would be proud to be married to him.

 

He thought she looked peckish and needed to eat

so they walked to a cafe on the next street,

then he stopped and he stared deep into her eyes

and asked if she wanted potatoes or fries!

 

13/10/20

© 2020 John Alexander McFadyen


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what a joy to read .. great fun ..wonderful sense of rhythm and fine rhyme .. much as in a child's story to spark young imaginations .. love the music ... a treasured album and much philosophized over song choice ... who really is the Walrus?? Thanks for sharing John .. great day to ya!
E.


Posted 3 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

And top of the morning to you big 'E'' and many thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
This is super adorable. The potatoes and fries part at the end is extra cute but unfortunately giving me cravings that I cannot give into due to my gestational diabetes. Lovely song too

Posted 3 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

3 Years Ago

Thanks Kari, glad you enjoyed my excursion into nonsense poetry. Oh and that Shrew!

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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