The Undersea World Of……

The Undersea World Of……

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

I recntly did my 8th Dive

"

You drift above me,

a flick of your muscular tail

enough to propel you forward

as you cruise the depths.

 

You are a true predator

a killing machine built for purpose

but much maligned without reason

by we humans.

 

Your dorsal fin immortalised

in ‘Jaws’ the cinematic creation

of Steven Spielberg,

the king of directors.

 

But I watch you in awe,

a magnificent specimen

of sleek marine life

second to none.

 

The ampullae of Lorenzini on your snout

sense the electric fields emitted by animals in the surrounding water,

letting you home in on prey quickly,

and at speed, in the final attack phase.

 

You are indeed an apex predator,

some would say a cold-blooded killer,

but the fact is that you play a vital role

in the health of marine ecosystems.


Me, I don’t belong here

beneath the waves,

scuba diving a la Jacques Cousteau,

and I am humbled.

 

15/10/23


© 2023 John Alexander McFadyen


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The underneath has always fascinated me. Every time I dived. This encourages that fascination. Well written.

Posted 6 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Months Ago

Strange as it may seem I started diving in September two months off my 69th birthday!
Ken Simm.

6 Months Ago

I'm envious but I've just had two metal knees . But then I wouldn't need my weight belt would I?
John Alexander McFadyen

6 Months Ago

Ha,ha! love it Ken, that is so funny! Sory you have had to have that done. I am lucky and get thre t.. read more
I love the message of this piece, especially the line "Me, I don't belong here", it holds so much power. Amazing job :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Months Ago

Thank you Nadia. Being a new diver I am overawed by it all.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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