Hug!

Hug!

A Poem by Paddy
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Inspired by a party!

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Before i greeted my friend's, 
before i got a drink, 
before the world could continue revolving around me. 
My eyes met yours, 
how those cute eyes sparkled in the lovely lights. 
My body compelled itself towards you, 
My soul reached out as i embraced my arms towards you.
 I would rap my arms around you 
wishing i could hold on forever...

Just at this moment,
I could feel your warmth,
Only making me grip tighter,
and wanting to hold on forever... 

© 2011 Paddy


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What a sweet moment! And perfectly captured! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 21, 2011
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Paddy
Paddy

Suzhou, Jiang Su, China



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Yea, sure, i may only come on this site occasionally but i still love to read and write. Honestly, haha, if you do say my work sucks...well theres not much i can do unless you tell me how to improv.. more..

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