God?

God?

A Poem by Paddy

God,
Do you truly exist?
For your follower's,
Believe in you truly...
For i do not.
With all your might,
Power, Strength,
Why not help us?
Why leave us?
Were you with us in the war?
For many fought and did not make it.
Did you not help them?
Tis' within your power is it not?
For many have died and risen.
Why not help mother nature?
In her struggle to survive,
from the stenches of factories...  
WHY NOT HELP US?
Even in our most struggling times you do not show up...
Do you exist or not?

© 2011 Paddy


Author's Note

Paddy
I mean absolute no offense towards those people that do believe in him, i am simply expressing my own opinion..

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I believe what you wrote is the inside struggle all of us have concerning God whether you be Christian or you believe or not. I am a Christian and I do believeHe exists, but sometimes I have my doubts beause of the things you just wote about. However, when I look around at the beauty of this awesome world we live in- I know He has to be real.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Paddy
Paddy

Suzhou, Jiang Su, China



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Yea, sure, i may only come on this site occasionally but i still love to read and write. Honestly, haha, if you do say my work sucks...well theres not much i can do unless you tell me how to improv.. more..

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