A long long time ago ...

A long long time ago ...

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe
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hi all :) just some ramblings not much bliss

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Hello my friends how might you be?
Believe it or not i've been  thinking 'bout you
Is Blackbird still singing her song?
Gary weaving webs of love, emotion?
Fabian taking all on a journey throughout
Natures beauty , telling a story or two?
Where's Jude , T.L. nah nah nah nah nah nah
Hey Jude

Where is Bubo and her magic pen?
Her poetry i could read over and over again
I see Dale rode in and took over the town
So we have nothing to fear
 I hear he is one
Of the best wordslingers 'round

I haven't written a poem in a day or few
sometimes this happens , ever happen to you?
Life gets me down and my mind is all blurred
With sadness, sorrow , seems no hope for tomorrow

I'm not mad just a tad sad
I'm not angry
Just a might confused

But hey my friends I been thinkin' 'bout you
An I promise you this
I won't ever  forget you
 

© 2009 Chloe..Across the Universe


Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
So many many friends i made on this site i left out but i remember you.. peace and love all .. i remember a long long time ago how this site made me smile i miss that place and those people who left.
Those who read my writing thanks so much be back soon to read one from you

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I'm so glad to have read this, in all its whimsical lightheartedness, the missing faction and truth gave me chills chloe, its a pleasure to be reading your talent once again, I remember those faces as well
and your words bring back many memories of days gone by, I've always admired your pen, i think you
know that, and the voice in your words is soft as a cotton cloud, which I find quite brilliant


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ohh what a love, Chlose.. they are gone.. perhaps they have books.. they moved forward. Someone should let them know about your poem!
I also would never forget you, Chloe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just smiled and smiled reading through your references to some I have known nearly two years now... People I feel honored to call friends... Like you! This is such a beautiful bittersweet poem, realizing that some have moved on and are deeply missed. I truly loved this piece!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

come back soon, you need to be writing :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm so glad to have read this, in all its whimsical lightheartedness, the missing faction and truth gave me chills chloe, its a pleasure to be reading your talent once again, I remember those faces as well
and your words bring back many memories of days gone by, I've always admired your pen, i think you
know that, and the voice in your words is soft as a cotton cloud, which I find quite brilliant


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well that is such a nice way to honor your friends... but I am not the best word slinger round... just write what i feel but that was sweet of you.
It is nice to see you back here... we missed your humanity.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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