I Wrote a Poem For You

I Wrote a Poem For You

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

My lack of writing has forced me to write this - have a barf -- bag on hand!

I wrote a poem for you
really I did but the dog
ate it
every last word
and said, ' Yum, yum'

I wrote a poem for you
honestly I did but I spilled
my drink on it, it soaked it up
every last word -blurred vision

I wrote a poem for you
this is the truth
but the wind blew it away
the tattered page tumbling through the air

I wrote a poem for you
of this I tell no lie
but I dropped my f*g on it
burned to ashes - garish- gray

I wrote no poem for you
I told a little tale
I hope this doesn't send me to hell

Oh well

Does anyone hear bells?

© 2010 Chloe..Across the Universe

Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
I am sorry about this lol
I love you all tho so please - forgive me?
Just too harried and hurried to write what's in my heart, on my mind
so I wrote this drivel
Oooops i didn't mean for this to be rated lol but thanks

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This was a very interesting read, I love the part where you wrote "I did but the dog ate it" and how you ended it with "Does anyone hear bells?" Slightly humorous, I enjoyed reading it. You're clearly very talented, keep up the great work. I hope to read more from you soon.

Posted 9 Years Ago

No hell's bells...lol! Very true how we tell people what they want to hear!

Posted 13 Years Ago

I liked it, no drivel here. I especially love poems that are just scattered bits of thought. This one made me smile, and sad at the same time. That sense of false promise, those tiny lies we absently tell one another sometimes, you scattered it perfectly. X

Posted 13 Years Ago

drivel, snivel. I found it entertaining my friend. smart, cute, funny, onry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

Cute, humorous, I think everyone has one of those sill days ;] I like it, very enjoyable :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

:) i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago

This was a cute write. Enjoyed every word.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I love this. it rings of style and humor, and voice, I wrote a poem for you" in essense the catch line is the muse. the term plays off the idea which gives the different scenerios that light up the readers heart in catchy yet whimsical ways. i found myself tickled by the idea, because it takes the sense of being a poet brings it to life, bringing the idea of sentimental value, and the heart
together in a comical escape" "does anyone hear bells" ha ha

Posted 13 Years Ago

I love this write!
You got those feelings out there.
This is wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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18 Reviews
Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on April 26, 2010
Tags: no muse, nonsense, writer's block


Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR

Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..


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