Shades of Purple

Shades of Purple

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Purple, I love your 
majestic hues the sunrise
sunset

Elizabeth Taylor's
eyes and those
bruises- only

Small bruises
you left upon 
my shell of a body
my joke of a mind

My heart when
beating with
yours

Close your eyes 
let me kiss your lids
of purple

To sleep
dreamless, blissful
anesthetic sleep

Where dreams that are dreamed in
royal purple beneath calm waters
last

forever?

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Add a poem ... quickly i have to write this quickly and ... it shows.

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The image of the bruising reflects energy and erotic pleasures, the shell of a body... seems a bit of a brittle image -- and then, was the 'beating' heart intended as a play on the bruising? lol Purple is a very arousing colour for me.... deep dreams... yes, for sure... deep and accompanied by bruises... I'm just rambling lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is a most awful poem or just ramblings.. don't feel bad to say it .. maybe Charlie Sheen took over my body and wrote this through me..there is a line for him .. joke of a mind .. ah, poor guy really feel bad for him to be honest.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the title as I like the color purple of all shades...I agree with spoken word this is how this is...like a dream drifting without an apparent pattern from one point to another yet it does have meaning...wonderful writing...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Purple is the color of passion, romance and sensitivity..I use it in all of the flower gardens I plant..You have done very well with the color in this poem...
This poem reminds me of a deep purple million bells, in a hanging basket.
Its words, and phrase terms weeping down to the finish in fine floret shades of lavender to deep purple.
enjoyed

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh, how I do love the color purple....my FAV! Your thoughts are lovely!!....(and it is okay that you wrote it quickly, as perhaps the best ideas come when we just let them flow)!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it's lovely, & kind of cute in a sense. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it! Purple just happens to be my favorite color too. Good write.=)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Is purple your favorite color? It is majestic they say and it is the color of bruised skin and heart. I like when you allow your mind to drift and your pen to just write, it may not have direct meaning but taken line by line it has many meanings. Like a dream that leads from point I to point A with no pattern and yet it has meaning. Very good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Jibey can't you tell... I am rambling too lol
No clue what this means it just came out .

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not sure of the meaning of this .. but the mystery of it is quite intriguing .. you go from emotion to colour to person to colour again .. maybe your thoughts are in a jumble or maybe I'm not seeing clearly. As ever though, you write with depth and care ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a dreamy & beautifult piece

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR



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Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..

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