A long road of the unknown

A long road of the unknown

A Poem by Patz Leviste
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unknown

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a long road of the unknown,
keeping your feet to start walking coz you're alone.

no light is shining from beyond
and the wind was so cold as it blows.

giving you chills up to your bone,
don't know what is on the other side of the road.

the rain pours and the ground is wet,
now the thoughts in your head starting to melt.

just close your eyes and have faith,
because the road of the unknown will see the light again.

© 2017 Patz Leviste


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Patz Leviste
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Beautifully done. The unknown with all of its uncertainty, its fears, its doubts. Yet your guiding light is hope and faith, pushing you forward to find what? May be your destiny.
Awesome job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Great description of the "unknown" like the ending, I am a sucker for hopefulness.

One note:

"because the road of the unknown will be see the light again" (remove "be")

Enjoyed the read, cheers!



Posted 6 Years Ago


Patz Leviste

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. I will revome it. Typo haha thanks agan. Cheers!
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Karen Redburn

6 Years Ago

You're welcome!

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Patz Leviste
Patz Leviste

Laguna, Region 4-A, Philippines



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