Oblivion (Love)

SONG LYRIC: Spirit Self is little self's Oblivion -- AND WHOLE SONG IS ON THE PLAYLIST -- DON"T MISS OUT!

Make no more fractured conclusions

zero falderal

I am a way through illusions

hero's journey tall

A thousand miles on a hi-wire

keeps a man awake

Go step by step in the true fire

all for goodness' sake

 

No flock, no block, no fatuous grins

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

 

You miss the mark if you believe

more than seeing through

You're better off with some tea leaves

than old priestly coups

God's not some stick in the dead sky

graybeard daddy-o

It is the source of your plum pie:

psychic body flow

 

No flock, no block. . .

 

(Instrum bridge)

 

You're wise to deal with your Shadow

sabotaging grace

It's not a threat, just a bad sow

unawakened face

Ain't no recalcitrant demon

just your woolly head

So get a clue, get a beam on

shift your sight instead

 

No flock, no block, no fatuous grins

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

No stock, no crock, no ignorant sin

Oblivion (Love)

Oblivion

Author's Note

WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN! WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN! WHOLE SONG ON THE PLAYLIST. . .LISTEN!

Reviews

[Ravenskald]

"You're wise to deal with your Shadow
sabotaging grace
It's not a threat, just a bad sow
unawakened face
Ain't no recalcitrant demon
just your woolly head
So get a clue, get a beam on
shift your sight instead"

Love this verse , reminds me of Don Juan, if you see Evil stop looking at it !
Thats where it gets it power. A powerful statement

~Raven

[Ankhesen Mié]

I really liked the beginning; it was no-nonsense and made me sit straight up. Excellent song; great verse right here:

"You miss the mark if you believe
more than seeing through
You're better off with some tea leaves
than old priestly coups
God's not some stick in the dead sky
graybeard daddy-o
It is the source of your plum pie:
psychic body flow"

[Nymphadora]

thanks for sharing this poem mr. pax... i've read this again and again to get a grasp on its content. since english is my second language, i had a difficulty in comprehanding some of the lines. but, i tried. lol.

i had a little feeling of guilt whenever i read poems like this which counteracts my agnostic side. but in the end, i will always remember what you've told me about god's existence... it's a mind game.

"You miss the mark if you believe

more than seeing through"

oh well, here we go about the concept of Zen...

it's a strong poem mr. pax... a great weapon and i'll always admire you of that.

[Lyrical Love]

This is the first time that I have read a piece and been totally lost..
I read the other reviews to gain incite, but it didn't happen for me.
I feel lost because I can't see it...
I can't feel it either. Please help me out with this-I guess it is
time for our conversation. LOL!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very cool... hey sometimes love can be right in front of you but the distractions of life keep it hidden from you.

[octane143]

Such beautiful flow, and the depth of this is amazing!
You're wise to deal with your Shadow

sabotaging grace

It's not a threat, just a bad sow

unawakened face

Ain't no recalcitrant demon

just your woolly head

So get a clue, get a beam on

shift your sight instead

Man I so get stuck in my head all too often, and it's an extremey dangerous place for me to go! I let way too many things f**k with my inner well-being. I like the "shift your sight instead". It spoke to me and I'll try to remember that next time I go in there!

[chloe cruz]

Again, you pulled off something great! *is jealous* Hehe. Sorry this reviews so short but I gotta go... bye!


~ Chloe

P.S This was brilliant.

[Anima Inspired]

First, great sound; melodic, strong and passionate. As for the lyrics, I am so impressed with the depth of your writing, as you don't just "scratch the surface" in order to make something that sounds good (though all of your stuff sounds good), rather you really go deep and get to the heart of things.

You're wise to deal with your Shadow
sabotaging grace
It's not a threat, just a bad sow
unawakened face

--loved these lines...

[JRB]

I can relate, nice work, great sound, I really enjoyed this line,,
You miss the mark if you believe
more than seeing through
You're better off with some tea leaves
than old priestly coups,
God is not dead, they where never alive. Thanks for the read,
Jan/uisiom

[emmajoy]

I've read, I've listened and ok, I'm there in the words and the meaning... I thi-i-i-nk. Sometimes it's best not to dig too deep!

' Ain't no recalcitrant demon / just your woolly head / So get a clue, get a beam on / shift your sight instead '- so like the movement in these lines.

Thanks for sharing your word skill, your lyric breaks, and, of course, your musical talents.. all on par.