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Response to Senryu Slayers WOD "diaphanous." Long a fave word, particularly in light of The Ever-Present Origin. Via psych rigor and intuitive ease one arrives at spiritual transparency, diaphaneity.

past the great divide
via villa paradox
X diaphanous

Author's Note

The Zen behind haiku forms can be understood in context of magic-mythic-mental-transparent cognitive modes, or 1-2-3-4 dimensions. "Diaphanous" is a fave 4-D word via Jean Gebser's The Ever-Present Origin. This poem tracks ratiocination to "seeing-through." [Edited 11/21, after noting syllabic mind gaffe.]

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Ach, I went through my read requests wearily and was saving yours till last because I needed a blast of your surgent vigour. I have read so much dullness. I wld rather die than read the things I find myself reading. There is sooooooooo little worth reading. So, so, so very little, less. There is no point to most lives. Not all people are interesting, very few in fact. Most are numbingly dull. And most people who write wld be better of painting road markings. Please, please, please write a story about a party at Villa Pardox ... make it out rageous. Invite me so that I might live one wild day. Yes, I want to go to a party at Villa Pardox and I want you to be my host and I want you to stun me because Pax mate, what else is there? Anyone approaching the Villa will be admitted to the poem or returned to the dullness of their world.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

the best place to cortex out and fall down the helix zone~!

[Robin]

I like Haiku and really like this one ..

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your deep...there is an abyss here..falling into the realms of dimensions...I need to read more on this..you have my brain buzzing for more information..

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Why do I find myself wanting to do the robot and shout, "Go Pax. Go Pax. Go, go, go Pax!" ? My neural impulses are aflutter in my brain from this one.

Oooh one finally drew you out of the wood work. I knew it was only a matter of time.