My Life as a Schoolboy

This one describes a day life of a normal school going kid....the experiences he goes through the entire day.........

Early in the morning, I wake up from the bed

my dreams came to an end, like a SUNSET.

I got fresh my mother said-

"Quickly have your butter and bread.

Have your milk and get ready

I'll prepare tiff-in for you and your daddy."

I wore my uniform and went out,

the bus driver was about to shout.

Then six hours in school,

don't ask, sitting like a fool.

everything bounced over my head,

as soon as the bell rang, I fled.

Reaching home, rest of the day,

mamma  scolding, not letting me play.

Then at night,

her eyes made me fright.

"Go straight to bed,

to wake up early", my mother said.

Author's Note

please tell me if there is any grammatical error

Reviews

[Imagination-mage]

well i can't give ur grammatical correction cause my grammar sucks but i really enjoyed this poem. It's short, and gets right to the point.

[Peeyush]

thank u so much....it means a lot to me!!!