Coast

This started with a picture. From the picture it grew into cars and I just kind of blended it together. Does it work? Let me know.

That sheer dress hugs curves

like Range Rovers grip roads over 45 miles

per hour.

Symmetrical sensationalism,

mixed with supple hips and ample bosom

make men reach for themselves,

then faucets,

then cold showers.

 

Bent over for a fender-bender,

my torque takes over...

hands running thru your mane,

I aim to tame you,

while you drip down on on-lookers below.

Teach me what you know,

is there a deeper place where I can go?

Tongue touches areola,

n*****s grow,

hair up-ended when I suck your toes.

Are you wet, yet?

 

Rolls-Royce face and waist,

Aston Martin ride quality.

Murci(elago), your back End(zo) is killing me!

Exxon Valdez never spilled like your orgasms,

please!

Cadillac plush cushion,

speed limit-pushing....

Infinity has to go higher due to

the Acura of your p***y.

I Hum(mer) like a beast,

as I get more fuel for the dollar,

on the highway.

And you ride like a Hybrid Camry,

as we....

coast.

 

Reviews

[Flow]

This one made me smile, I think you reached your goal of combining the two. I like how descriptions could be used for both her and the car. It was different and unique glad you took the risk on this one~

[Kia]

I enjoyed this very much. It was descriptive and tasteful at the same time and well put together. I like the style of it too. Nice!

[TamiViolet]

I think I can relate to this one very well dear one. And what an analogy...cars to a woman...
sort of reminds me of Prince and 'Little Red Corvette'... She's got the curves that you want
to caress...that make you need a cold shower... She must be older because you ask her to
'teach' you... You want to go deeper into her...both mind and body...and the toes..smile..
Well, Madonna knows about that. She's a ride you'll never forget... taking you higher....
But you must know... She can't help who she is... You must know that you'll never 'tame'
her Michael...

Into the favs...
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[Choosing Life]

It works quite nicley..

You merged the two concepts into one..

Your word choice was excellent