The Augur's Web

In part mental detail I was merely walking inside my woods, yet further, deeper into the warming blood of truth,  I was staring hard and regressing into a hidden web of freedom. A freedom joined at my legs and fashioned to the pall-bearing branches of end. The subtle, yet deadly intricacies marked a clear moment and strength in my life. The moment began weaving a rise of conscience like an old noisy loom. In that wooden Ganja I tasted my memory complete but in the air that stared back in wilderness, I knew we stood as one. Autumn was close and I couldn’t tell whether I was in love with that idea or not.

You see, normally I know the seed of that quandary instantaneously…I know like fear knows its slip of edge once dawn pulls back all the youth of darkness but alone inside this web and in the blurry-eyed musk of August I was embraced by my final cliff.

Reviews

[jennifer little]

great write I liked it keep up the great work

[Alisa Js]

Hello and happy Labor Day!

I find it fascinating how something other than words have the power to reveal the truth! The longer I live, the truer it seems...

...and yet, without words, how could we describe it?

Curious...

;-)

NIcely done, you!

alisa ;-)

[Perdition]

We could describe by pictures as they say it paints a thousand words...Or we could describe merely by silence which is my favorite....And yet I am a writer..Go figure. Wonderful Insight Thanks A.

[Alisa Js]

Anytime, my friend from across land and sea....

Sending you thoughts of everything amazing,

Always~

Alisa :-)

[Frieda P]

I like the gazing you took into the crystal ball of nature here, sets some spectacular imagery in motion...love the line "Autumn was close and I couldn’t tell whether I was in love with that idea or not." Muchly enjoyed...

[Perdition]

You must have spent some lives inside the eyes of the Augur. Very appreciated. I dwell as often as possible beneath the poetry of trees and above the touch of crystal. Thank you so much for the kind review.

[Easterlily]

I love that connection with nature we can have when we really listen and look closely enough....I have had some of my greatest epiphanies while out enjoying nature, and some of my deepest healings, too.
I liked the voice you used to write your poem and enjoyed the direction they took my thoughts and emotions. I related to the vulnerability and enjoyed the dialogue of your inmost thoughts...
Really liked this and thanks for sharing...

[Perdition]

I do as well....obviously. Pantheistic 1000%. Thank you for sharing your connections to this voice.

[Jayden Goodrem]

(Clap clap clap(and Clap some more)) I liked it. I was good I really did. Can you tell me how to think up these sorts of things please? But really loved it thank you for putting it on this website.

[Perdition]

Thanks!... Mostly, I rely on the will of the muse and her kindness toward those who are desperate ....or One part candle..Two parts flame.