The Life In Winter

Look at the snow my love

Falling, twisting

Twirling white smiling rise

The cumulative blockade to a world abject life

Isn’t it wonderful?

To be once again in the arms of a warm silence..

The roads smothered over in heaven’s light

Like all time spent 'tween you and I

This is where we can dance again

In alms of youth and mercy…

Look at the snow my love

Have you never seen something quite so pure?

The world now lost of centuries 

Tonight we'll claim our love again 

Out in the pastures of hoofs and driven sled

Out in the eventual melting beauty

And when the roads appear again, I will whisper

the words into your heart of the life to be found in midst of winter.

 

Reviews

[¿]

This peom works as a well knitted with care quilt or sweater...the warmth where no chance of cill to enter!!
Splendid write...enjoyed so much as winter's my fave anyway😇

[Perdition]

My favorite time as well, love the comparisons..Thank you again for reading!

[¿]

Wc😊.....!!!

[Stephen]

Romantic, peaceful, filled with empathy ... Nicely captured few moments of your life in words. Great job!!

[Perdition]

Four years later and all apologies. Thank you for your kind words and apologies as well as so sorry I missed these words so long ago.

[Stephen]

No need to be sorry, my friend. I have been long gone off this site as well. Luckily, found some time to memorize the site, and ripe my old memories so just visited it again. Glad to hear from you and your reply. Hope your life is going pretty good. Much blessings and peace.

[Matilda]

Completely elegant and romantic. I think it's great and it makes my heart warm. Great job!

[Perdition]

What a wonderful review….Thanks Matilda!! Can't wait to read your offerings as well~

[Perdition]

Sorry I missed this one…Thanks as always for the kind words and in response to your request…I will consider in time but I have to let the question settle. the knee jerk reaction is most definitely YES…but the choice in subject matter being murder/hauntings and so forth "mystery" as well as unrequited love demands time. In the mean time thanks for the words and as always for stopping by.

[A. Amos]

Your poetry is like watching a movie, I was in different era of time and memories.
There is a class and elegance in your write and very few are blessed with such a God gifted talent..Thank you for sharing

[Perdition]

hahaha..hello my friend. How I missed this so many years ago I have no idea however the impact remains and holds.

[Tara]

This reminds me of your earlier work. pure simple and romantic. And I can see wispy twirling under the flakes ! lol....wish i were twirling with her...I miss you guys and dancing on the sand with her. You certainly are eclectic...this one is so different from the others I have been reading from you tonight!

[Perdition]

Is not :p.. Come twirl!!!...we'll raise the fence down this time~

[Frieda P]

Utterly romantic, this would keep any woman warm on a chilly winter day.

[Perdition]

Sorry for the delay...You way are way too sweet. Thanks for your review and yes i am a hopeless romantic and She is a wonderful gift that makes it all too easy to find myself caught deep within the twirls of rose blossomed romance,

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful HAWK.
Simply Beautiful.

[Perdition]

"As I want us to be

[sharonlee]

Such grace... nicely woven.

[Perdition]

I simply couldn't help myself....Shux~

[Nicole Williams]

"To be once again in the arms of a warm silence..."
A stunning line, in an amazing piece of art.

[Perdition]

Aww shux..lol. And thanks for the request.

[Nicole Williams]

no problem, cant wait to read more of your work :)

[Little Whisper]

I am twirling arms wide open, looking up into your words, feeling them like snow flakes gently kissing my cheeks...softly blanketing my heart with a peacefulness that comes from the warmth of You. From..... that place.

[Perdition]

This is a revival of my older and more present ways...felt good to let the beauty in and the pain out. Snow....what a thing of life and love. Thanks "Wispy"...."A diamond in the rough"..?? Really?!..lol.

[Little Whisper]

Very Really......