Droplets of Tangier

A guitar like cancer leans 
To a pale rhythm
I strum to her breasted jazz 
Where night 
In mystery falls
Soon the language all its own
Returns 
Life Moroccan 
A droplet of Tangier
Her shame filled eyes
Lost inside the window 
A place where her voice lays 
Stitched to jazz 
Silk mooned in valance.

Author's Note

Damn those freaking seeds that bury themselves in darkenss…No worries I still have the original….just in case.

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

Wait, you posted something new and I didn't even know about it?! I am crestfallen!

Now that I've finally read it, I love it. ^-^

[Perdition]

Awwwww…me too…lol

[Brittany Zedalis]

You love it or you're crestfallen? xD

[Perdition]

Both and neither..HAH!

[Perdition]

wait..what//

[Brittany Zedalis]

You ought to love it, you're the one who wrote it! ^-^

[Brittany Zedalis]

what what?

[Perdition]

well then maybe I do!!!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Then it's settled, lol. xD

[Perdition]

Good..hope it is :P

[Maumil Mehraj]

After reading the poem I feel like I've been transported to the dry land.
Lovely!

[Perdition]

…lol…Thanks..guess I should send you send the airplane ticket ~

[Maumil Mehraj]

or maybe write another poem about some other place.....money saved, yay!

[Perdition]

NOw is that the true poet's way?

[Maumil Mehraj]

I guess! ;)

[Dina K.]

Now that's truly impressive! :D Well done!

[Perdition]

Inspiration I be thinking..Thanks~BTW..Smoke alarm went off right before a realtor called. Something REALLY wants me to stay. Fell off the ladder but I'm okay, Takes a hell of a lot more than a fire threat to get me to leave:P

[Dina K.]

Wow looks like you had quite a night... You're crazy for staying! But hey those kind of decisions are the ones that make good stories... Sorry about the fall though :/

[Perdition]

You know who's crazy? YOU... crazy ...I only fell as far as the ground and the poem was worth every inch, you should see it in the light way…Perfect!, :P

[Perdition]

light OF Way…I suck!

[Dina K.]

Lol x) I'm just glad you're okay...

[Perdition]

Well My head hurts a little and I can't recite the old testament sooooo…MEDIC!!!

[Dina K.]

Ow sorry to hear that... I promise you'll feel better after that pomegranate juice! ;)