Forsaken

It's my first time writting poems in English (not my mother tongue). Observations or criticism is welcome. C: This is dedicated to all people who have felt forgotten in any way.

I am present,
In a merciless misery,
As I am forgotten.

Fear of find relieve fast,
the darkness increases.
Shut down the despair of the abyss!

Everybody forgets,
feelings, moments, people...
An endless list of hellish forgetfulness.

Today, I am final,
as my figure becomes blurred,
In you, I become nothing.

Author's Note

Plz tell me if I have grammar problems :P

Reviews

[nazia]

I hear you my friend. All of us feel the same way one time or the other. Being forgotten is what we all dread the most.. Very well expressed :)
Keep writing