Months without sun

The coat was waving in the cold wind, she was walking quickly through the streets, cars passing by. She sliped on the ice, almost onto the road, a car beeped at her. She got back on her feet, and kept walking, holding her hands over her mouth to keep warm. Her pants was soaked with icy water from cars that have splashed puddle water on her as they drove carefree past.

She finally saw the neon lights from the store, her belly was roaring for food. She put one hand in her pocket just to feel if the money was still there, and she smiled.

Author's Note

I really want to know if you like this and you feel you could read more!

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Excellent.
Just write a more complete story.
This is too short.
A great story as far as it went.
----- Eagle Cruagh