different

 

I look into your eyes

Expecting to see you looking back

But all I see in your eyes

Is emptiness

Hollowness

You say you love me

But your voice is empty

Hollow

I thought you said you loved me

But I know now all you mean is

I hate you

Yet you keep coming back

Again and again

Leaving

And coming back

You’re using me

And I know it

You use everyone

Around you

This time

I wont fall for you

Again

This time will be different

 

 

9-25-08

Reviews

[Lexy]

This is good. Before I finished reading the poem, I thought that I would tell you to change the title to "Hollow" but "Different" is perfect for it. I would try to keep at least one thing constant, like one thing that is the base for the rest of the poem. Does that make sense? I hope it does. But I still liked it anyway! =)

[crap]

this poem is nice and has a solid flow, try adding a little something concrete in detail about what makes this specific relationship so important.