Absense

Absense

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Again, about the loss of a loved one.

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Alone again... 
I've lost a friend,
I don't pretend, 
hope it's not the end.

Won't you please return? 
Can't you see that I burn, 
maybe we've lost our turn, 
but for you I yearn. 

We said we would be together, 
always, for ever and ever, 
but family ties sever, 
hope someday will be better. 

I hope we can be happy once more, 
don't know what the future holds in store. 
Being with you was never a bore, 
and you've made life better than ever before. 

These days of suffering torment, 
can the Heavens hear my lament? 
From Past, to Future, in Present, 
I always feel that you are absent. 

© 2025 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
Breaking my writer's block. It has been a while.
All visits and reviews are appreciated.
Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

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it’s alway sad when a loved one passes, one feels alone,and wants that person to return to life…..it is lonely, empty and and gray….a beautiful tribute to a loved one.. nice use or words and structure of poem…. thanks for sharing.,
Warmly,B🌷🌷🌷

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much for your visit and your review, Betty. I agree, and I am glad you enjoyed this poe.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome my friend
Warmly, B



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it’s alway sad when a loved one passes, one feels alone,and wants that person to return to life…..it is lonely, empty and and gray….a beautiful tribute to a loved one.. nice use or words and structure of poem…. thanks for sharing.,
Warmly,B🌷🌷🌷

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much for your visit and your review, Betty. I agree, and I am glad you enjoyed this poe.. read more
Betty Hermelee

1 Day Ago

You are very welcome my friend
Warmly, B

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Added on May 23, 2025
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Tags: Loneliness, loss, absence, absent

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Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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