Hana Banana

Hana Banana

A Poem by Peter

She leads a life dedicated to others
helping to bring people together
showing the correct way
and so on this day
i write for you---- my habibti
just so that you can see
that i thank you
for all you do
 quick to lend your ear
and listen to my worrisome fears
helping me to have a Valentine
and worry not; in due time
i will help you the best i can
and yes i will make that plan
for a trip away; sometime in May?
We head for Montreal!!

© 2010 Peter


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Less words can cover this whole thought in this 16 line poem. Don't give up; you can do it! Thankfulness is a virtue; keep it up!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Peter
Peter

St.Catharines, Canada



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