Love Is

Love Is

A Poem by Starship
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Love is much more than what it seems.

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Love is something
That comes once in a while
It tickles in your stomach
And it makes you smile
The one you love
Is yours to keep
So keep walking that path
Even if it gets steep

<3

© 2011 Starship


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Starship
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Starship,

Quite honestly, it is adorable. Technically, you did a great job of not forcing your rhyme. It works, you have the knack for flow... keep them coming.

Have a wonderful day,

Legacy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So far i like the optimistic view about love and trying to fight through it no matter how hard it gets. It all pretty much fits together and flows well so far so good job:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 25, 2011
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Starship
Starship

New Hartford, CT



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Hello, I'm Laurel (: I love to write and do photography on the side. I'm a huge owl fan and have a collection of over 20 of them. I believe I am a very unique person. I like so many different thing.. more..

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