The Twisted Paths

Just a poem about the twisted paths of life

I am lost in twisting paths,
with no idea where they go.
Blind but searching
I go on...

So many things I hear.
What do I believe?
I don't know if it's worth it anymore.
Blind but searching
I go on...

So many feelings locked inside.
The madness deep deep down.
All the moods fight each other.
Blind but searching
I go on...

It's all so overwhelming.
I'm amazed I've went this far.
When will I find this haven?
Tired from the madness...
Blind but searching...
I go on...

Reviews

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Its very well written, I like it. I understand where your coming from with this, life is twisted but we have to go on with it. Excellent job hun.

[Devan]

I'm glad you like it. I was able to easily write this through many personal experiences that was affecting me. Everyone can relate to it.

[~FALL3N-ANG3L~]

Yea, good job again. That's the test of a true writer, they can relate it to themselves as can the readers.

[GloriaJean]

I love this poem, it really let the reader see the process of thoughts we all have , yours very introspective and well written about not quitting . Thanks for sharing.

[Devan]

Thank you, it's a personal poem of mine I had wanted to share. A lot of people can relate to this so I think I captured that well in this.