His Voice

For Paul, a.k.a. Super Saiyan Paul, a.k.a. TheCodBrothers

That voice - 

Don't make me explain it!

Each time I try,

I sound progressively crazier. 

Deep, husky, 

with a twinge of east coast, 

but what enchants me the most

is the distance between us

Not miles or hours, 

but cold, unyielding glass

which gave me your voice 

but would not bless me twice

Until one day at last

when that voice found its home

and I stared at the screen

completely astonished.

No blissful thought

born in night or cloudless day

can do justice to your face, 

a treasure cloaked in secrecy. 

Beguiling and dangerous

is the woven web between us,

yet mysterious and beautiful

are your virtual eyes. 

I'm completely exposed now 

behind these worn keys, 

but a poem for you

is worth it to me. 

Author's Note

This poem is dedicated to a Youtuber named Super Saiyan Paul, a.k.a. TheCodBrothers. He does great video game commentaries, so go check him out! You can judge the poem, but don't judge my fangirl-ness! Hehehe just kidding! Anyway, I'll put a link to Paul's channel below. Thanks so much for stopping by, and have a great day!
<3 Elisa
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCCea0NSLYEfbEeppFnpxvCA?spfreload=10
P.S. If you're subscribed to Paul/will subscribe to him, don't show him this poem. This will be our little secret, ok? ;)

Reviews

[Horizons]

Beguiling and dangerous
is the woven web between us,
yet mysterious and beautiful
are your virtual eyes.

Beautiful stanza that I loved the most by the side of loving whole poetry. Sweet, Melodic, Adorable, & seemed like a tribute to someone's heart. Deep words you use to treasure your poetic-art. Great job once again! ;)

By the way, No worries, your secret`s not meant to be revealed. Shhh... Quiet. (Smile)

[Elisa]

Hehehe thank you!

[Horizons]

Welcome ;)
You should start writing a "Secret-Diary" of such things in the poetic-form. It'd be a great Idea if you think over it in a free time. Don`t ya find it interesting? Writing words. Sketching images. Filling spiral pad notebook with your scents. Saving it in your drawer or may be, sometimes, under the pillow. Lol Jotting down words sitting by the fire, lake or whatever suits you. Lol No interesting??

[Elisa]

I do that on my phone usually, but I agree. There's something quaint about having it written by hand.

[Horizons]

Yeah... writing by hand gives a new way to thoughts to play around.. with its threads. If you`re asked `bout the fav. tourism of "Paperback" and "E-books", which one you`d pick up as your fav. one? I meant, You love paperback or e-books?

[Elisa]

As far as reading books goes, I like hardcover :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u r awsm . i liked it vry much

[Elisa]

Thank you! YOU'RE awesome!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

me ?? really !!!!!!!!!!!!

[Elisa]

Yasss girl!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thnku bt i still doubt

[Elisa]

You're welcome! Aww don't doubt yourself!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

jst joking to make u laugh

[Elisa]

Hahaha I see what you did there ^.^

[~]

Gorgeous poem. I can definitely listen to his voice through these lines.
I smiled at your fangirl comment. :)

[Elisa]

Aww thank you so much dear! Haha you know, he's so cute, I just can't help myself sometimes! Lol thanks for reading!

[~]

you are welcome sweetie!!

[Saddam]

Expressed well and so well written verse.
Like it.

[Elisa]

Thank you :)

[Saddam]

Welcome dear friend.

[E G TEN]

Very nicely written, now you got me listening to my voice as i try to mimic a deep and husky with a twinge of something,,, hwhehe"" thanks for intimately sharing your lovely poem ;-)

[Elisa]

Hehehe thank you so much!

[AaronFreitas]

haha that is awesome :) Yes... our little secret my friend ;) Good work I really enjoyed it

[Elisa]

Hehehe thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

[AaronFreitas]

:) I got yo back girl :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I have the same feelings for Ryan Gosling or Colin Firth or Sylvester Stallone. Shhh! But it is a lovely poem, a tribute to a quasi-celebrity that is almost sane sounding. He would be, I am sure, very fortunate to receive this as a gift.

[Elisa]

Your secret is safe with me :D I kinda don't want him to read this because it makes me seem kinda creepy lol but if he read it and LIKED it? I would swoooon!

[nazia]

mesmerizing.. The voice it seems is intoxicating and you are all in awe of it... Great expression :)

[Elisa]

Thank you! You hit the nail right on the head!

[sinNsincerity]

hehe great one right here, "[B]ut a poem for you is worth it to me," just devoured me! =D

[Elisa]

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for stopping by!

[One Lost Anti-Hero]

I loved the way you expressed his voice and how you felt in this. I understand how it feels to be left breathless by a single voice. Great write.

[Elisa]

Thank you!