Bittersweet

Bittersweet

A Poem by Kalevshnikov
"

is it over..?

"
Bittersweet
by. Pharos

"Is it over..?" 

"It's over. We're together now." 

And after all those years,
and countless many regrets...

We are finally together.

© 2020 Kalevshnikov


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Unconditional love never fails yes it takes a long way to realize the importance of each essence in heart but all is well if it ends well. I appreciate your work and acknowledge your feelings. Keep writing Pharos. Have a wonderful day ahead:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kalevshnikov

11 Months Ago

Thank you!
I like the way you tell a sad story without giving it away. I'm guessing the two are meeting in death, but maybe I'm wrong. The one correction I have for you is you said were instead of we're

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kalevshnikov

12 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and pointing out the correction!
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