Crockery

Crockery

A Poem by Phibby Venable




 

 
Crockery
 
Help me from this crockery,
this potted plant
The cracked soil holds harder each day
I need the cornucopia of greens & blue & the brass
of a sun
I need a strong sun.
I want to ease my leg over the side of this ensemble
& drag my clay to a high palm
I need to look out over water.
There are realities I have no use for
In the middle of my performance here
I can hear cardinals hidden in the trees
There are spontaneous colored lights
and I can see them through the gray
Yesterday I saw my soul brush
the hair from her eyes,
sit up in an astonishment of fey fixtures
She was looking for some wild & warm thing
She was looking for the tallest tree, the deepest sea
I cry when I laugh, which could be a sign
I could be the smile of an omen
I could be worn out
I could easily break all the potted plants
that guard this house.
 
 




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© 2008 Phibby Venable


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great poem. I love the feeling of being out of control that you convey and I love the character at the end. Reminds me of my mother...

anywho, great job

Posted 17 Years Ago


lol... this was so wonderfully penned and the ending was funny and reminds me of someone that I know.. I too am an overachiever.. do they have an anonymous group for that? lol.. thanks for sharing..

Posted 17 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can empathise with this piece of writing.Life seldom goes the way we plan. You have to keep trying though although you may never know the impact you have on others lives

Posted 17 Years Ago


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Phibby Venable
Phibby Venable

abingdon, VA



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http://youtu.be/25XE-BHGvWI http://youtu.be/B2klgDKMUq0 I live in the mountains of Southwest Virginia. Although my passion is poetry, I recently published a novel called, Women of the Round Tabl.. more..

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